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daidoji_gisei) wrote2006-05-30 11:47 pm
daidoji_gisei) wrote2006-05-30 11:47 pm
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Two Haiku
The last scout meeting of the year was tonight. I may have more thoughts on this later, but for now here are two haiku I left scrawled on the sidewalk of the church we met at.
Peonies in bloom
in early summer heat
nod heavy pink heads
Catalpa rising
into heaven fears no lightening
only time
I think the first one is more successful overall, but I like the idea of the second one better. Maybe I'll try to work on it more? I'm really a lousy poet, but I like the compactness and stringent design of haiku.
After the meeting Linda, Linda's daughter and one of the other girls and I were leaving the building together. The others stopped to read what I and others had written on the sidewalks. "What's that?" the other girl said. "Haiku" I told her. "You're weird," she said firmly.
Peonies in bloom
in early summer heat
nod heavy pink heads
Catalpa rising
into heaven fears no lightening
only time
I think the first one is more successful overall, but I like the idea of the second one better. Maybe I'll try to work on it more? I'm really a lousy poet, but I like the compactness and stringent design of haiku.
After the meeting Linda, Linda's daughter and one of the other girls and I were leaving the building together. The others stopped to read what I and others had written on the sidewalks. "What's that?" the other girl said. "Haiku" I told her. "You're weird," she said firmly.